User:Jarmstro1208/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title:Jacque Fresco
 * Article Evaluation:The article need more information about the Venus Project, as the note above states "The article never explains what the Venus Project is or what it does." If it's important enough to have it's own section, then it should have more information.
 * Sources:https://www.thevenusproject.com/

Option 2

 * Article title:Architectural animation
 * Article Evaluation:The middle of the introduction paragraph could be slimmed down, as it feels drags the definition of animation just a bit too long. Also there should be more information about Jonathan Ingram, as he doesn't even have a separate Wikipedia page attached to his name to learn more about the history.
 * Sources:Jonathan Ingram - Here is an article about him, but it says it may not be trustworthy.

Option 3

 * Article title:Hanging garden
 * Article Evaluation:No more than 2 sentences per section, and no sources sited. Everything needs more information.
 * Sources:https://www.nps.gov/glca/learn/nature/hanginggardens.htm

Option 4

 * Article title:25th century BC in architecture
 * Article Evaluation:Has nothing except for one sentence about Stonehenge. Could definitely find more building erected in this century.
 * Sources:https://www.nationalgeographic.com/history/article/giza-pyramids#:~:text=Pyramids%20of%20Giza&text=National%20Geographic,roughly%202550%20to%202490%20B.C. :pyramids were built roughly around this time as well.

Option 5

 * Article title:Hazel Wong
 * Article Evaluation:Has no history about the subject of the article, mostly just a long paragraph about the Emirates Towers. Though, it is difficult to find information about her.
 * Sources:https://www.silverenedubai.com/arhitect.html :https://www.linkedin.com/in/hazel-w-s-wong-675606150/?originalSubdomain=ae :https://www.constructionweekonline.com/business/article-43844-face-to-face-hazel-wong-wsw-architects