User:Jaschale/Postcolonialism/Lbatesro Peer Review

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Jaschale
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jaschale/Postcolonialism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Postcolonialism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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You have so much to add here! Interested to see how much of your writing will stick to the original article. It looks like formatting wise for your sandbox try building out the citations and reference list so it reads more like how it will appear in the article (this will also help with copying and pasting your text into the original article once you're ready to do so). This is a big subject and it seems you have fully embraced that by creating a lot of content to add.