User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students/Ailenilin Peer Review

General info
Jasmeen.Kaur88
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Alcohol use among college students

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, it looks like the author's contribution is able to specify the topics addressed throughout the section of the article. Although the lead could've been more helpful by quickly summarizing what the article is about, it's something that I never realized I should do until now anyway so I feel like they did the best they could.

The content added is definitely relevant to the topic at hand. The author was able to describe the positive impacts that came with counseling, and it is seemingly neutral, though I would refrain from absolutes that emphasizes on positive/negative impacts for students who seek counseling (unless theres definitive statistics of course; you're absolutely right that counseling is going to help, but is there data to support this?) Which leads to my next concern.

I could not find a source anywhere for the author's point, even in the bibliography tabs. I'm assuming it just wasnt published but it would be nice to have the author back up their statements with at least one source of information to further reinforce their point.

Overall it is concise and straight to the point (which is great) but I would recommend that the author further their point with a reference. It has great potential, and I'm looking forward to reviewing your future changes!