User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students/Jalaaa Peer Review

General info
Jasmeen Kaur
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Alcohol use among college students

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and composes what the passage will introduce. The content is relevant to the topic of alcohol usage among college students. The content is up to date and provides cited sources. The tone is neutral. No images or media provided. Overall the additions adds a evidence based solution to the topic.