User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students/Nitishaaaa Peer Review

General info
Jasmeen.Kaur88
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the work is well written with all contents pertaining to the topic and being structured in a concise way. Additionally, there seems to be little to no bias; but I think adding the other perspective of what alcohol use does and/or the negatives of alcohol use could be a good way to eliminate all bias and show another perspective. Most importantly, there was no references. I saw the brackets for the sources, but they weren't visible anywhere in the draft. All in all, the work is thorough, but the sources are missing.