User:Jasmeen.Kaur88/Alcohol use among college students/Wangh138 Peer Review

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Jasmeen.Kaur88
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Alcohol use among college students
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Alcohol use among college students

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This article is very comprehensive and covers the many causes of academic alcoholism, as well as some preventive and treatment measures.

The article uses a lot of quotes and data, which increases the persuasiveness of the article.

The article also mentions the legal issues involved to provide readers with popular science.

The article maintains a neutral point of view and fairly introduces drinking among college students.

There are no grammatical issues in the article, which is great!

The article also uses some images, which attract the readers' attention and make the article more interesting.

I think this article is well done. The only thing that can be modified is that the publication date of the cited resources can be slightly newer, which would be better! ! Overall I really enjoyed your article on the causes, effects, preventive measures, etc. of alcoholism among students.