User:JasmineBriggins/Attitude (psychology)/Haleymck Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JasmineBriggins


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JasmineBriggins/Attitude (psychology)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Attitude (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jasmine! For what you have written I am confused as to where you are going to put it. I understand you're 'defining' attitude but you're also commenting on some of the factors that contribute to attitude. In this case, I think you should expand on the 'factors' section of attitude for your addition. Also expanding on genetic factors would increase the strength of your point! Good work and I look forward to seeing what else you add!