User:JasmineG17/Homosexuality and psychology/JessDeckk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasmineg17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JasmineG17/Homosexuality and psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homosexuality and psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homosexuality and psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article is probably one of the most interesting so take advantage of that. Homosexuality and with psychology reasoning is still fairly new.

I think it would be good to add onto "causes" because there are some theories that seem relevant. You could also add a section on how relationships (in terms of love) can be hard. Love is something every human needs.