User:JasmineG17/Homosexuality and psychology/Mitchellweed Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JasmineG17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JasmineG17/Homosexuality_and_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homosexuality and psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Very interesting addition about the controversy of Charles Kinsey. Good citations included.

I am excited to see what you add regarding the mental health of people of color in the community. If you want to add more, you could include the "Born this Way" movement in the Havelock Ellis section.