User:Jasmine Groves/Eileen Gray/KaySwayArtistry Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasmine groves


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jasmine Groves/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eileen Gray

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would just work on the working of the information you are adding. Some of these things don't exactly sound right and can be easily misinterpreted.