User:Jasmine Groves/Eileen Gray/PuzzledArchaeologist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Jasmine Groves)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Eileen Gray


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eileen Gray

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) I have reviewed the content that you have added to Eileen Gray's Wikipedia page. It fits into the article very well, even as it was introduced within paragraphs. Your tone is neutral and relays facts from reliable sources. It is my belief that the information you added was relevant to the article. I also thought that the sentence on the tragedies that happened at E -1027 was a great way to tie in more history about the place she lived.