User:Jasminefun4/African-American dance/Wd234323 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasminefun4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African-American dance


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You did a nice job with including a nice amount of detail while not bloating the article with a bunch of unnecessary words. Also like how you separated the eras for African dance then linked the relevant articles instead of bunching it up.