User:Jasminegpaz/LGBT stereotypes/Gracekmeyers Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasminegpaz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * LGBT stereotypes

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) First, what does the article do well?
 * 2) Very structured outline of representation of LGBTQ+ stereotypes. Has clear, concise sections for each part of LGBT. I really like the section titled “Intersections between LGBT, race, and class stereotypes” and think that the intersectionality is a necessary part of this wiki page.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article?
 * 4) I would add a section titled “Queer stereotypes” because every other letter in LGBTQ has a section! Also can add non-binary and other categories for stereotypes.
 * 5) Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 6) This would help to keep the information inclusive. The LGBTQ+ community is a growing community with a growing number of unwarranted, unfounded stereotypes so you could add more sources.
 * 7) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 8) I think the most important improvement you can make to the sections is adding consistent sub sections. For example, the “Gay men” section has several sub sections that help organize the stereotypes, but for the “Lesbian’ section, there are no sub sections just paragraphs. This makes it hard for the reader to quickly locate the information and interpret the differences.
 * 9) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article?
 * 10) Yes, I am writing about cartoon network and LGBT representation and there are similarities with how Cartoon Network displays LGBTQ people in a stereotyped manner.