User:Jasminegpaz/LGBT stereotypes/OSabates Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasmine


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jasminegpaz/LGBT stereotypes
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT stereotypes

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content

- the content added is very relevant and very detailed.

- the content is also very up-to-date.

-all of the content actually adds to the original wiki article and gives a more well-rounded discussion.

-the topic addresses the marginalization of the LGBT community and the stereotypes that contribute to this marginalization, especially for those of color.

Tone and Balance

-the content added is neutral but also insightful to specific topics addressed.

-there was no bias opinion

-there are no opinions that are underrepresented or overrepresented.

-the writing is not persuasive but it does add to the arguments that were already implemented prior to her additions.

Sources and References

-all the new content is backed up by a reliable source

-the information accurately describes the sources

-the sources are thorough

-the sources are current

-the sources are written by a list of diverse authors

Organization

-the content is well written

-the content has no grammatical error

-the content is very well organized

Overall Impression

-the added content has most definitely improved the quality of the article

-the added content was much more detailed and linked the paragraphs together