User:Jasminenwee/Lea Starita/Gwenf13 Peer Review

LEAD:

- article lead is concise and clear

- information needs to be cited

- lead introduces readers to Staritas career and research, it need to include introduction of education as well.

CONTENT:

Education; bachelors degree information needs to be cited.

Education; PhD and fellowship citation link worked

Education; if you’re able to find information you can provide the thesis/dissertation that allowed Starita to obtain their PhD.

Research and career: 2012 research at University or Washington needs to be cited

research and career: citation to 2017 assistant researcher at University of Washington only shows she is an assistant professor, however it lacks to provide the remaining information within the sentence, add another source.

Research and career: Brotmany- Baty institution citation worked

research And career: research is well explained and nicely sourced

Select publications: you can add a little citation box at the end of each article citation so its easier for the reader to just click on the box and go directly to the source.

SOURCES:

- some sources should be added to education and additional source should be provided for career information

- all citations worked

OVERVIEW:

- article is neutral

- education section is a little short compared to other sections, more information should be provided if available

- viewpoints are nicely represented