User:Jasminenwee/Lea Starita/Izzys.young Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasminenwee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jasminenwee/Lea_Starita?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked how you added links to external sites if there wasn't a wikipedia page for it. I also really liked your research and career section. You did a good job of breaking down the overall research goals of her lab while incorporating future aspects and the important techniques she used. Additionally, I liked how you broke it down even further with the Seattle Flu Study and COVID 19 because those are both very relevant and important topics to expand on separately.

The questions I'm left asking are about Lea Starita removed from her research such as does she do any outreach? is she a part of any boards or professional organizations? Has she received any funding, awards, or recognitions?

Important wikipedia internal links to add: geneticist, seattle flu study (redirects to seattle assessment network) [i know you have the link to the website but I think you could included both especially since you reference it often], functional genomics

I think for better readability you should add your links to the words the first time you mention them on your page. This way if someone is confused early on they can find out that information immediately rather than later on in the page. Additionally, a few time you had the same phrase hyperlinked more than once like UW Medicine and Seattle Flu study I think it is sufficient to link them the one time especially if the repeated words are in the same section.

Overall great job! : )