User:Jasonguoo/Don't Yell at Me/Maiab3 Peer Review

General info
- Jasonguoo
 * 1. Whose work are you reviewing?

- N/A (new article)
 * 2. Link to draft you're reviewing
 * - LINK HERE
 * 3. Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead

- The lead is succinct and straight to the point, but does not include a brief description of the rest of the content on the page (mentions that it is based in Taipei, but only has a focus for its first location in Seattle).

- While the article mentions that it is a chain, it doesn't talk about the global aspect.


 * Content

- The content added was relevant, up-to-date and overall a good choice for the article.

- The article would benefit from a section about the founders, history of the shop, etc.

- This article does not dal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps.


 * Tone and Balance

- The content added is neutral and has no claims that are bias.

- There are no viewpoints that are under/overrepresented, as the article is mainly about the location of the bubble tea store.


 * Sources and References

- The content is backed up from a variety of sources that are reputable, and the content does accurately reflect what is inside the article.

- The sources are current and have a diverse group of authors, and all the links work!


 * Organization

- The content is well written, and there are no grammatical/spelling errors.

- The article is also appropriately broken down into the sections that reflect the major points of the topic.


 * Images + Media

- The images include a brand logo, storefront, and bubble tea picture-- they all work together to create a comprehensive picture of the bubble tea shop and are visually appealing.

- I'm not quite sure if the photos adhere to the copyright guidelines (as the pictures were taken from Facebook and a "personal believer), so I would just double check to be safe.


 * New Articles

- The article does adhere to Wiki's notability requirements and has an exhaustive list of secondary sources (I'd say this list is fairly impressive given that it is a bubble tea shop).

- The article does link other articles like Capitol hill, Restaurants, University District and even a drink portal for discoverability.


 * Overall Impressions

- Great job for starting a new article! It looks great and you did a wonderful job.

- Again, I feel that this article could benefit from a 'history' or 'founders' subsection, just for an added "umph!"

- This article is succinct, well written and easily digestible. I really enjoyed learning a little bit more about this chain.