User:JasperFLugo/Fuquay-Varina Woman's Club Clubhouse/Thomsaleme Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasper Lugo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JasperFLugo/Fuquay-Varina_Woman's_Club_Clubhouse?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is solid. I think you could maybe expand just a little on how the clubhouse offers historical significance. Adding something at the end of thats sentence like "through the events it hosted and projects undertaken within it" or something of that sort. That sentence just sounded a bit weird at first, but it is solid as is. The content of the body is really good. I like that you talked about the women's club in general at first and then expanded into the clubhouse as a whole. One thing I would do though is create another subheading to differentiate the last paragraph since it's more about the structure of the building, not the construction and history of it. That would also probably make the whole article seem more thorough too which is good. Another small part I would maybe add is some more information on the region of North Carolina it is in. I don't know anything about the region so I was a bit curious and I think it could add more context to the article. Overall though, really solid article. Gives a good amount of history so that I feel like I know everything important about it, references look good, external links and see also look good. Having an image is a great touch too. Well written, sourced, and neutral.