User:Jassimrit Mohindru/Settler colonialism in Canada/JKendraB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jassimrit Mohindru


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jassimrit%20Mohindru/Settler_colonialism_in_Canada?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Settler colonialism in Canada

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
Good start with ideas of what to add to current lead.

Content
Content ideas seem good. I like how you have already selected which subject of the article your different ideas would fall under.

Tone and Balance
No bias so far. Once thoughts are expanded into full sentences make sure the tone is consistent

Sources and References
Why are there multiple sources labelled number one and two?

Organization
Organized under subtitles accordingly.

Images and Media
Be sure to add images!

Overall Impressions
Great ideas to start with. Make sure all these ideas are backed by a source.