User:Jaswinder kaur 005/Art/SANDHU20 Peer Review

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Jaswinder kaur 005
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * wiki/User:Jaswinder%20kaur%20005/Art/SANDHU20_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)