User:Jawabii01/Small intestine cancer/Kmp038 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jawabii01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jawabii01/Small_intestine_cancer?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jawabii01/Small_intestine_cancer?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Specifics:

I left 5 annotations of your sandbox draft, they are underlined, starred, and italicized. They address specific areas in the article draft that need citations, grammar corrections, and comments on overall order.

Overall: You did a great job of finding what the article had not covered already and adding it. I would make sure that all statements are backed up with sufficient sources and cited within the article. I think the overall structure could be improved and made a little more clear by changing some headings. Make sure that the information that you are adding does not get too repetitive. Good job so far just add a little more information.