User:Jawabii01/Small intestine cancer/Srh030 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Jawabii01/Small intestine cancer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jawabii01/Small intestine cancer - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I have made numerous comments within the sandbox draft directly. My edits are in italics and bolded or bolded and underlined either within the paragraph or directly after it. Overall, I feel like you have a great start to your article, but there is a great deal of improvements that could be made. I did notice that there was a lot of repetitive phrasing and incomplete sentences. There is also a lot of work that should be done for formatting and intext citations before the final is posted. I would suggest doing additional research and rereading your edits aloud before submission. However, I did like the risk factor area. It seems like all of that information as well as your sources are excellent and hold a great deal of potential.