User:JaxC135/LGBT culture in Chicago/Josiesch Peer Review

General info
JaxC135, Ninafedorko, Sarahcs12
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JaxC135/LGBT culture in Chicago
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):LGBT culture in Chicago

Evaluate the drafted changes
The references are from a wide range of years which is very good, if there are relevant links maybe have some that are a more recent. I agree that there needs to be more under LGBT culture in Chicago. There is important context that isn't there. In the actual article I think there needs to be more information and could definitely take out some of the article. Some of the information seems not important.