User:JaxC135/LGBT culture in Chicago/Kebhfp Peer Review

General info
User: JaxC135
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JaxC135/LGBT_culture_in_Chicago?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):LGBT culture in Chicago

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead has not yet been updated. However, the original article isn't lacking in the lead section very much. I don't expect much editing or updating will be needed.

Content:

The content that they have added so far is relevant and up to date. I see that they have notes in their sandbox on topics to further expand on that I think are important to this topic. The article does reference historically underrepresented communities and their plan (according to the sandbox) is to highlight other marginalized communities that the original article falls short of.

Tone and Balance:

All content added seems to be neutral so far and seems to find more references that representes information accurately and objectively.

Sources and References:

Sources are thorough and current. The way that they are used in the edits accurately represents the content of the sources being cited. I think they should use more peer reviewed articles and some articles that speak specifically on topics related to Black queer people as there seems to be a lack of resources with the intersection of Black and queer identities.

I am interested to see how the notes and the minor edits in the sandbox end up coming to fruiting to complete the original article.