User:Jaxhere/old stuff/Archive-Jul-2007

Sheerness FAC
Hi. I'm sorry to bother you, but as a LoCE member, I just wondered if you would be willing to have a look through the Sale, Greater Manchester article. It is currently a Featured Article Candidate and needs a copy-edit for grammar by someone who hasn't yet seen it. Any other ways to improve the article would also be welcome. Thank you very much, if you can. Epbr123 16:03, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Seems to be an excellent article, I made only a minor edit. -- JAXHERE | Talk 16:17, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Epbr123 16:18, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

Want to improve Valdivia
I want to improve Valdivia, Chile article so that it turn into a "good article" at least (but I still have more ambitious plans for the article). I readed your post in WP:Chile talk and saw then the Sale, Greater Manchester article. The artlicle is very well structured with well defined topics and subdividisions. In the Valdivia article I have lot of problems with that for example I wrote about scientific research in the Culture sector but then when I wrote about Education i had to repeat a lot of what I said in the culture. the same hapens with Economy and History, and Culture and History.. Could you take a look to the page to improve or give suggestions? Dentren |  Ta lk  19:10, 5 July 2007 (UTC)


 * At first glance, I feel that the article is quite well developed, but I will try to give it more attention over the next week or so, when I have time. My biggest concern at this time is the lack of references for the article.  This, I believe, is an essential element for any article to reach featured article status and which I noted was well done in the article about Sale.  Since you've provided extensive material to the article, I'd hope that you can provide the sources at least of your material and if you can find sources to support other parts in the process that's what I'd encourage you to do.   JAXHERE  | Talk 15:46, 6 July 2007 (UTC)