User:JayRel23/Darryl B. Hood/Ajaslay Peer Review

I recommend structuring the paragraph better. Maybe mentioning that “He graduated with a bachelor science degree in biology and chemistry” towards the beginning of the paragraph. For example, “Darryl B. Hood graduated with a science degree in biology and chemistry and is known for being an environmental neuroscientist at Ohio State University, founder of the of Multigenerational Effects of Inhaled B(a)P on Development project, and leader of the most successful Minority S11 NIEHS- sponsored Initiative known as Advanced Research Cooperation in Environmental Health (ARCH) Program.

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