User:JayRel23/Darryl B. Hood/Friendlyjellyfish7 Peer Review

I think your lead is off to a good start. I would suggest maybe rearranging to help with the flow. Currently I feel it "jumps" from sentence to sentence. Maybe start off with his education and background and then get into his current day contributions. Additionally, maybe adding a photo will make the page more personal since the topic is a person. After the lead, I suggest adding a section that focuses on his major contribution to comparative developmental biology. Maybe compare, contrast, or connect him with other major figures in his field. After this, maybe a conclusion section about what he is doing today and how his works have impacted the world. Good sources.

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Jayrel23 and Mhlooney


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