User:JaySShieh

What I would add to this page is to give explanation of some energy mentioned. Second I would go more in depth about the section secondary energy. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primary_energyJaySShieh (talk) 03:01, 24 October 2017 (UTC) first add more information about water heating second include more architecture and urban planning https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_energyJaySShieh (talk) 03:01, 24 October 2017 (UTC) I would add more information about the obstacles section. Second I would break down the introduction so the reader would be more informed about what this is article is about. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/100%25_renewable_energyJaySShieh (talk) 03:01, 24 October 2017 (UTC)