User:Jaycar71/Thought disorder/T01H98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jaycar71


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jaycar71/Thought disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Thought disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see that you only have two sentences, which is fine for a draft, but it would be best to elaborate and have the sentences make sense together. Just writing out more general information or finding out how to include your references into the original article would be good.

Thank you for your input. I will definitely add more to it shortly and also add the areas in the article that I plan on contributing to. ~