User:Jayde1974/Evaluate an Article

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Breads On Oak

to evaluate?
Breads on Oak is something I am familiar with and as a class c article could use some attention.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section- gives a good overview of the article although the wording is a bit clumsy. It does a good job of hitting the major points discussed in the later sections.

Content- The content covers the history and the cuisine served at Breads on Oak.

The history is brief and concise but perhaps too much so. Discusses Sean O'Mahony's reasoning, history with food and credentials but offers nothing about Chamain O'Mahony other than that she is vegan. Again, language is a bit choppy and weaving the robery of the restaurant in between accolades is awkward.

Also, the Covid information is outdated because both the Carolelet and Oak St locations are open with indoor and outdoor seating, and delivery and pick-up options available.

Sources are varied and plentiful.

The cuisine section also needs to be updated since according to the website their bakery menu has changed drastically although the cafe menu seems to be mostly the same. The material covered is relevant. it could however use some updated information dealing with the closures due to Covid-19 and if quality has been documented as changed.

Tone and Balance- The article is written with neutrality. There aren't any opposing opinions to the documented good reviews.

Source and References- 4 out of 12 of the cited links are broken including the one from National Geographic. The majority of sources are from Louisiana newspapers and "Best of" lists, including one BuzzFeed survey- all of which act more as an advertisement than anything else. Author of Livekindly, https://www.livekindly.co/new-orleans-bakery-breads-on-oak-ditches-meat-dairy-and-eggs-and-goes-vegan/, one of the sources is a contributing writer from Australia whose credits for writing about restaurants is not available on the website.

Organization- As mentioned throughout, text is somewhat awkward and some facts are oddly placed. The article is clear but could use some editing. No misspellings or grammatical issues noticed.

Images and Media- There are no images or media embedded.

Talk Page- there are no entries on the talk page for Breads on Oak.

Overall- Article could be more in depth about background of founders and more factual information about practices and updated information. Article could use some editing to make for smoother understanding.