User:Jayde1974/Goat cheese/Wikiwikichrissy Peer Review

The lead has been updated with a citation and more information.The lead could include a brief description of the articles major sections.

The sandbox for the new headings "to be" added do reflect more content relevant to the topic. The headings under "Properties" could be rearranged different... HISTORY could come before Properties as it's own heading...

ENVIRONMENTAL and ECONOMIC IMPACTS are in a good place...

I am reviewing Jayde1974 Article on Goat Cheese

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