User:Jayhy15/Abdominal exercise/Dlozano04 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Reviewing Jayhy15
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Abdominal exercise

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * The Lead has been up to date.
 * The Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic but it is misplaced.
 * The Lead includes a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * The Lead includes information that is not present in the article.
 * The Lead is overly detailed and needs to be replaced where "effects" is.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is up to date.
 * There is no content missing.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is neutral but it needs some work.
 * No claims seem biased.
 * No viewpoint over or underrepresented.
 * Does not persuade in any way, more informational if anything.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * This new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.
 * The sources are thorough.
 * The sources are current.
 * The sources are written by diverse range of authors.
 * The links work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * The content is concise.
 * The content has a few grammatical/spelling errors.
 * The content is organized.

Images and Media

 * The article does not include images.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * The content has improved.
 * Added a section.
 * Can be improved with better grammar.