User:Jayjaywink/Jean-Michel Frank/Asheare2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jayjaywink


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jayjaywink/Jean-Michel Frank


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jean-Michel Frank

Evaluate the drafted changes
Add the location of where you are making the changes, like the Intro for example. Re-word the last sentence, "He was 46 years old at the time. (when he died)", because it doesn't flow with the rest of the article. Include more sources and citations in your writing that are reliable.