User:Jayjaywink/Jean-Michel Frank/Emmarshelton Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FlyingLobster, Jayjaywink, Lemonlime2020


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 * Jean-Michel Frank
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 * Adding a picture of Jean-Michel Frank and an informational text box might be helpful to know some additional information as well as get a visual on the person the wiki-biography is about! :)
 * Adding a citation about the information on him being a removed cousin of Anne Frank I think definitely could be helpful if someone wanted to learn more about that.
 * Adding his first name in some of the beginning paragraphs while talking about the Frank family might make it a little less confusing of who the information of each sentence is referring to.
 * The section on Career was very descriptive and provided a great explanation on how he got the experiences in his career that he did as well inform the reader on the projects he worked on.
 * The information box about Frank's Club Chair was beneficial and gave a better visual on the kinds of works he completed.
 * Citation 10's link doesn't work
 * A great article and very descriptive of his life and career. Adding more cited pictures of his works could be beneficial as well.