User:Jayla P/Convergence culture/Atallent Peer Review

General info

 * I will be reviewing the work of the convergence culture group and the content of the existing article
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Convergence culture, User:Jayla P/Convergence culture

Lead evaluation
An updated Lead has been drafted in the group sandbox and offers a more concise view of the topic.

Content evaluation
As the group's editing continues, more relevant information contained in the book could be included to better explain convergence culture.

Tone and balance evaluation
Overall, the tone of the existing article is relatively neutral and provides sources where large claims are made. There are places in the article that are slightly overrepresented like the Survivor fans section, which could likely be condensed to reflect the most important information or the larger point of this example Jenkins uses.

Sources and references evaluation
The existing article's information is sourced well. A few new sources have also been found and have been cited in the sandbox.

Organization evaluation
There are a lot of subheadings under the section, Aspects of convergence culture, that I believe could be better organized by placing topics under more specialized headings

Images and media evaluation
The article contains two images of logos that are currently uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. The Reddit logo is well captioned and is a simple way to enhance one's understanding of the topic. I do not think the Half-Life Counter-Strike logo is needed as much in the article.

Overall evaluation
The group has started working on their article by editing the existing article's grammatical mistakes which is a good place to start. They have also worked in their sandbox adding new sources and information. Once more work has been done and they have added to the Convergence culture Wikipedia article, they will continue to be on the right track to improving this article.