User:Jayla P/Convergence culture/KRCPhilmon Peer Review

General info

 * are assigned to Convergence Culture.
 * Convergence culture

Lead
"Users can now experience an extended, interactive and even shared engagement with not just entertainment media, but also informational media." - The syntax of this statement may pose a bias element. I'd include that it was "suggested" from the Convergence Culture discourse.

Elaborate on the meaning of "convergence" itself. Fins sources that talk of the term itself to better illustrate the meaning behind the phrase Convergence Culture.

Content
In the Collective Intelligence section, I'd define what "mean-making" is according to Jenkins. What does that mean to a user that never heard of the term Convergence Culture.

Under "Matrix," there is a source link on its own without any content connected to it.

Under Rethinking Convergence Culture, what is meant by the term "catch-ll term" ?

"Other challenges that may concern a converged culture, is the political aspect of politics involved, regarding issues of media concentration and regulation of social networking sites and the use of "free labour". "- This statement is not backed up by a source. I'd elaborate on the term "free labour." What is meant by that and where did it originate from?

Tone and Balance
"This collective intelligence behind the reality TV show became so engrained into the show's culture whereby the executive producer Mark Burnett would "play" with his audience, misdirecting their predictions, and switch up his editing style to throw them off from their assumptions." - This statement posses a bias opinion. The trigger words are "became so engrained into the show's culture." I had made a minor edit on the article's page and changed "engrained" to the proper word usage of "ingrained."

Sources and References
The most current resource was from year 2017. It's the second source in the list.

Balbi, G. (2017). Deconstructing “Media Convergence”: A Cultural History of the Buzzword, 1980s–2010s. In S. Sparviero, C. Peil, & G. Balbi, Media Convergence and Deconvergence (pp. 31-51). Palgrave MacMillan.

Organization
The organization is well put together. I would expand on the research and add on to what is already presented.

Images and Media
There are only two images presented. Within the context of the article, more images should be added to elaborate on some ideas. For example, "Survivor" and "Matrix" are two emphasized ideas where an image would enrich the topic.

Overall impressions
Convergence Culture is off to a great start. There can be more added from the topics and headings in the book itself.