User:JayleneFeliz/Romanian mafia/Klgottlieb Peer Review

General info
Jaylene Feliz
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Romanian mafia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review 1:

I was really impressed by the layout of your article. I like that you included an environment sections because I feel like that is forgotten about frequently. I think the lead section of the article summarizes and addresses each topic very well. The only change I would make is that you could add some images to break up the words. I think your bibliography and table of contents look good as well!

Peer Review 2:

I think you could expand the lead section into the topics discussed in the articles that are in your bibliography and the topics mentioned in your Table of Contents. I would definitely add more to your contents section! I love the topics you chose for the Table of Contents. I think the tone in the article stays neutral.