User:Jaypanda95/Khao Sam Kaeo/LZU21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Khao Sam Kaeo: Jaypanda95, Julie Foss, and MKnightingale


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaypanda95/Khao_Sam_Kaeo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) - N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, this article is looking really good. All members did a great job of dividing their content into proper headings, including a detailed references section. The introduction is very strong, and does a good job at highlighting the important key points of the site. The section on "Trade" is also looking really good, but it may be helpful to include more different types of trade, in addition to beads; I don't think these have to be super long - just enough to provide the key points. I think the sections on "Metallurgy" and "Glass Technology" are great in terms of talking about the site's culture. If possible, I think it may beb helpful to add a conclusion section that highlights everything and summarizes the main points. Lastly, the references section looks properly formatted, with the correct type of sources.