User:Jaysbtg/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
American Institute of Musicology

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article as it seemed interesting enough and aligned with some of my interests. My preliminary reaction was that while it provided enough basic information, it seemed a little bare in some regards. For example, what did they research? There should be more information in my opinion.

Evaluate the article
The lead section does concisely explain the topic. I wouldn't say that it summarizes the major sections to a great extent, but it does the job. The content is up to date, and there is enough elaboration without being too wordy, especially when most of the article is dealing with publication. Everything is relevant to the article. The article presents itself as neutral and it does not contain any information that could persuade someone, as it's simply over an organization on early music. The writing could improve, but it does its job. The organization is a bit strange, but more information could fix it. Overall, it's a good article, but more information and sources could improve it.