User:JaysenC/International school/Lin2525 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(User:JaysenC)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JaysenC/International_school?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * International school

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I liked how in the "criteria" part, different point of view was discussed that disagrees with the criteria International Association of School Librarianship has created. One thing I think it can be included is International Schools in various countries and summary of each. But overall, the tone is neutral, paraphrasing is good, and the content is well-written!