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Article Evaluation of the "Lydia" Section in the Bennet Family Article
Everything in the article is relevant to the article topic of the Bennet Family. The section covers Lydia and all her characteristics and behaviors. The only thing that was distracting was the length of the quotes. No information is out of date. Nothing needs to be urgently added. There weren't clear citations within the text. It was mentioned that after every paragraph, citations are good. More citations were expected considering the quotations involved. The in text linking works out well.

Generally the tone is neutral except for a slight bias in the sentence mentioning Lydia as "assuming her sisters would be jealous  (...anyways)". The "anyways" isn't necessary and takes some of the objectivity away even if it's slight.

In the Talk page people are critical of the descriptions used for Lydia suggesting there was some bias from some of the editors. The article is part of the Wikiprojects Fictional Characters group and it was rated C.

Jazminsl (talk) 19:55, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Edits for Article
Edits for the article's synopsis for A Game at Chess will be on Team Member's Sandbox. Personal contribution is Induction and Act 1. Jazminsl (talk) 16:31, 18 April 2019 (UTC)