User:Jbains03/Domestic violence in the United States/Laylagoldberg19 Peer Review

General info
riyarajani
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jbains03/Domestic violence in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, you provide a richer, more detailed historical and functional perspective of VAWA, while the original focuses mainly on the results.


 * 1) Detailed Historical Context: It outlines specific reauthorization dates (1994, 2005, 2013, and 2022) and the establishment of the Office of Violence Against Women in 1995, providing a timeline that helps readers understand the evolution and sustained commitment to the act.
 * 2) Comprehensive Description of Impact: Not only mentions the outcomes but also connects these to specific legislation and organizational efforts, such as federal grants and the role of the Department of Justice, thereby contextualizing the statistics provided.
 * 3) Broader Scope: It describes the primary role and contributions of the Office of Violence Against Women in detail, emphasizing its efforts to evaluate and improve outcomes for domestic violence survivors, which highlights the multifaceted approach of the legislation.
 * 4) Quantifiable Achievements: By mentioning specific statistics like the reduction in victimizations, cost savings, and increases in reporting, it substantiates the effectiveness of the VAWA in a measurable way.