User:Jbains03/Homeless women in the United States/801johnna Peer Review

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Jbains03
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 * User:Jbains03/Homeless women in the United States
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 * Homeless women in the United States
 * Homeless women in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead and the content that you have added are great starts. Expanding the contributions about the early Great Depression and the recognitions of poverty in America introducing more government social programs might be a good bridge to your second point. Those programs became regulated and defunded as our populations grew, so did the politicalization of poverty and class through social construction of identities.

Content: I'm interested in hearing more about interest rates and political and medical responses to stigmatized marginal groups. Your example of the HIV/AIDs crisis response makes me excited to see you develop your Wiki edits further. I am interested to learn about these connections to homeless women in the United States.

Tone & Balance: Your edits sound like encyclopedia voice. The don't sound bias or as if you are persuading me. Tone and balance seems informative so far.

Sources and References:  Still need sources.

Organization: N/A. Underdeveloped. Your work is well-written. AIDSS should be AIDS. Continue to develop your points and then you can create sections/heading for these complex topics.

Images and Media: N/A

Overall Impression: Just started. Needs work. Your beginning contributions have the potential to improve the quality of this article.