User:Jbains03/Homeless women in the United States/Lfreeman333 Peer Review

Peer Review
User:Jbains03
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 * User:Jbains03/Homeless women in the United States:
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 * Homeless women in the United States:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your changes to the article did much to clarify the information. I was disappointed to see that there were no references included, sources were not cited, and none of the claims were supported. My suggestions are:


 * I would research the information included and cite the sources for added information and that of the original article
 * Cite source of information for added text, “The Great Depression in the 1930s resulted in a spike in unhoused individuals, and the large numbers of impacted individuals resulted in recognition for the difficulty these people faced”
 * Cite the source of information for added text, “when rising interest rates and societal factors like the HIV/AIDS epidemic served as contributors”


 * I would expand paragraph 2 by talking about how women are marginalized and neglected


 * I would discuss housing instability in greater detail and explain some of the factors that lead to this issue.
 * I suggest incorporating more scholarly contributions into your article