User:Jbc8/Sarah A. Connolly/Madilbrown Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jcb8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sarah A. Connolly


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sarah A. Connolly

Evaluate the drafted changes
Of the limited amount of information in this article, I think this is a good start. The Lead section can mention the work that Sarah Connolly is known for and hit a few points about what will be mentioned in the content section. In the content section, the author should research more about her early life, late life, and career. The content so far seems up to date with the adition of the sentence that mentions what she is doing in 2020. Still needs a lot of improvement and more research.