User:Jbell1017/Julia St./Semianduzi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jbell1017


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like that you have already started to use the template. I can't wait to see the completed article.