User:Jbevil1977/Impression management/ZIB0713 Peer Review

General info
Jbevil1977
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jbevil1977/Impression management - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Impression management - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is relevant and elaborates on the previously written information. The content is also neutral, easy to read, and has no grammatical or spelling errors. The first source (4) adds context as to how impression management is utilized when constructing an image of oneself physically in the workplace. The second source (6) brings an interesting light to the ability to recognize deception and how that impacts the coworker relationship. For the fourth area added ("Employees also engage in...."), I might have moved that information to be near the piece about deception for a better flow. Lastly, the link for source 9 is not working. It says DOI not found when trying to navigate to the page. Overall, great work. This was interesting and well put together.