User:Jblockychop/Lipid pump/Jordamal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JaJaBVB, Jblockychop, Leear2, Sallyllama


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jblockychop/Lipid_pump?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lipid pump

Evaluate the drafted changes
Significant detail was added to the lead, providing the reader with a deeper understanding of the subject without including an abundance of information. Each section had a brief description that doesn't present any information that doesn't appear throughout the article. Hyoerlinks are used well throughout, however there are some lower-level links that don't feel like they necessarily need to be there ('fish', 'buoyant'). All of the content provided in the article, including the pictures, is important to understanding the topic and the 'Key Implications' section was a great way to drive home the information. It was a great idea to add the 'Future Directions' section, as it could serve as a way for future editors to add to the content that has already been mentioned. The citations added show use of new and (as far as I can tell) relevant information, with sources as recent as earlier this year.

Minor edit: each section in the table of contents is being shown as a branch off of the lead so you might want to update the heading/sub-heading format.