User:Jbuec2/Rookery (slum)/Tamashi2314 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jbuec2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jbuec2/Rookery (slum)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rookery (slum)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead-Clear and detailed lead. Are there different types of Rookery?

Grammar fix:

Original: "city slum occupied by poor people and frequently also by criminals and prostitutes.:

Suggestion: "City slum frequently occupied by the poor, criminals, and prostitutes."

Content- The content is good. Can you add what the general population thought about Rookeries or stereotypes that were associated with a Rookery?

Tone and Balance- The tone and balance is good, no persuasion or bias.

Images and media- are there any pictures or sketches of Rookeries that you could add?

Organization- Nice use of headings and links!

Overall Impression- Article was well written and demonstrates excellent skills in Wikipedia. Sources are reliable and the citations are very well done.