User:Jcaine215/Generalized anxiety disorder/Beckie19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jcaine215


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jcaine215/Generalized anxiety disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the foundation that you have started however, I also agree with our instructor that I would like to see more secondary peer reviewed articles. It would not only strengthen the information you already have but add to the credibility. I also agree that I would like to see more from the original article to see how you are contributing and adding on to your page. Keep up the good work! I have included an article here that might be helpful in your search: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1002/da.10065?casa_token=y3fjgvy-lNsAAAAA:rRfQWyYyvJD93dOjtn8Xkeu4ejQpVAt0HzzvHNHyLaDt8XYfgR6OfmKDsnhUyTVrGGSBmC6kMDVn3Z8 it has a big focus on how it deals with society as GAD is not only an individual problem but can also be societal as people call out of work and skip class on account of it (as well as various other activities such as events, dates, and practice for sports and dance teams). The sociological aspect seems to be missing in the main article and would be something interesting to include in there and also beneficial to many people on Wikipedia. Best of luck!